User talk:Jungi0714

Welcome!
Hello, Jungi0714, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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So sad that your family dog does not recognize you! MMBiology (talk) 00:00, 8 February 2016 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi. I saw your request for feedback - is there something specific I can help you with? I took a look at your sandbox, and I see that you're off to a good start. One thing I noticed was that you haven't added a lot of sources. Bear in mind that everything in Wikipedia articles needs to be supported by citations, and that the reader needs to be able to connect any given statement to a source. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:06, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Feedback II
Nice work on your your draft, but as I mentioned before, you haven't added enough sources. Before merging your additions with existing peripheral nervous system article, please make sure that everything you add is supported by a citation, and that everything can be tied to the appropriate source. Right now, you have some paragraphs that lack any citations, and some that lack a reference at the end. While the source might be present elsewhere in the section, there's no way for the reader to know for certain. And as the article continues to grow as others people add to it, things like that can become more problematic. Since an article already exists, you shouldn't be trying to move your draft into mainspace - instead, you need to add your content to the existing article. But only do that after you have added sources.

In addition, I noticed that you have some empty sections in your draft. These either need to be removed or content added to them before you merge your contributions. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:55, 10 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Also pinging with regards to the comments above. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 05:00, 10 April 2016 (UTC)

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Stop moving your draft article around
You made two very incorrect efforts to move your draft article now. Stop doing that and ask your ambassador for help. Or ask me. But stop making a mess. Jytdog (talk) 05:13, 13 April 2016 (UTC)


 * as I mentioned before, you shouldn't be creating a new article at all; you should be improving the existing article. But even before you consider that, you need to make sure that all your content is properly supported by inline citations. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:32, 13 April 2016 (UTC)