User talk:Junheew/sandbox

Considering the state of the managerialism page before, I think there is immense improvement to the page seen in your group's revisions! I'm especially glad to see different sections for different aspects of managerialism. Some suggestions: 1. most of your page seems to cite only one or two sources - mostly Enteman. I'd suggest citing more sources and more often throughout your sections 2. make sure the content of each section fully explains the section title. For instance, I felt like the "Economic" section was more of a general overview of managerialism that had already been covered before 3. there's a lot of jargon and many long sentences, so both factors make the article a bit hard to get through and understand 4. really small detail: make sure language is consistent throughout, especially in the different spellings of "organization/organisation"