User talk:JunoBear/Environmental impacts of fur farming

Lead

Overall, I thought that the lead section was pretty strong. I think it gives a pretty good overview of what the rest of the article is about. It's pretty short and to the point, but still does a good job at giving readers an idea of what they are going to read about.

Content

I thought that the content of the article was really informative and you added relevant information to your page. For some reason, I wasn't able to see the bolded text that marked the information you added to the page, so I just had to look at the article as a whole.

Tone and Balance

The information in the article is neutral, nothing that contained bias or opinions really jumped out at me. I think that overall, I get the sense that the authors feel

Sources I think you did a good job at referencing reliable sources with the information you added. You also have a good range of sources, so you weren't just relying on one or two for all of the information that you added. In some sentences, I felt that there should be a citation added, but I wasn't sure if it was something that you wrote or someone else did.

Overall, I feel like your article is really strong and definitely adds to the conversation of fur farming!

GiavannaMagmurg (talk) 14:27, 29 March 2022 (UTC)