User talk:JunoBear/Environmental impacts of fur farming/Shaykip Peer Review

General info Whose work are you reviewing? JunoBear

Link to draft you're reviewinghttps://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JunoBear/Environmental_impacts_of_fur_farming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Fur farming Evaluate the drafted changes Lead: Provides definition of fur farming; concise and easy to understand; incorporates existing information from article.

Content: Content is up to date and relevant to the article; does not concern an equity gap.

Tone and Balance: Content is neutral; both sides of fur farming are represented; more information provided regarding the negative impact of fur farming; does not aim to persuade.

Sources and References: Sources are relevant and reliable; covers a wide range of topics. Shaykip (talk) 14:25, 29 March 2022 (UTC)Siobhan

Organization: Writing flows nicely; fits with topic

Overall: Really well written; I like how you included hyperlinks for some of the "jargon".