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 Hactivism Article

Great analysis - the article is missing sources and as you said several claims need to be substantiated. Does it need restructuring so that more could be included? If there is more knowledge on how these groups meet, organize, and coordinate that might be a useful thing too to leave in the talk page.

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Response: Thanks of the critique. I will ask to change a few sentences so that I can add a few more citations. I have added more sources so that there are now 9 new sources instead of the previous 6. I can not find any peer-reviewed sources through the Berkeley Library and I don't want to just rely on non-peer reviewed information to start a new topic or conversation about Hacktivism Jurgen.Prambs (talk) 05:12, 17 December 2016 (UTC)

Million Man March

You're completely right - article just needs more facts/needs to be lengthened. That's a good one to adjust.

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Response: Thanks, I will add more sources and get some more information. However, there are few peer reviewed information pieces on this topic. Jurgen.Prambs (talk) 05:15, 17 December 2016 (UTC)

Representative Democracy You're right it needs more sources, that's the main issue. Especially regarding dates and facts, as you pointed out it's clearly lacking.

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Response: Thanks, I have added more sources and extended the piece itself. Jurgen.Prambs (talk) 05:24, 17 December 2016 (UTC)