User talk:JustinDelC/sandbox

Hi JustinDelC. Here's a few suggestions I would make to your Chicken article draft: Overall, I find that topic fascinating and it would be a great contribution to the Wikipedia article. I also appreciate the sources mentioned. They are peer-reviewed.My Unique Deoxyribonucleic Acid (talk) 17:30, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
 * To develop a draft that shows a representation of the actual edit you are contributing to the Wikipedia article.
 * I would highly recommend explaining the muscles involved as well.
 * Possibly finding images online of possible muscles or tissues that are involved in the chicken's vocal structure.

Peer Review
Hi Justin!

I think you make it very clear about what your intended revisions/contributions are going to be. I'm honestly interested to see what you come up with, especially with the image you want to include revolving around vocal anatomy. Both of your sources look reliable, and I would honestly suggest maybe adding something about muscles in your comparison to other songbird species, as this can help give you and other readers better insight into the differences that cause these variations in bird vocalization.

Other than this, there wasn't much more to add since there was no actual drafting of a contribution for me to copyedit!--Bokhan (talk) 01:02, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review for Chicken Article
Hi JustinDelC! I think your plans for your draft are great! It seems like you have a great base for what edits you want to make and everything seems very organized. Here are my notes from my review: All information appears to be neutral. All sources appear to be reliable and peer reviewed. The draft is very well organized and clearly written. The page that will be edited is clear: Chicken The edits of other group members are not listed on this draft. Contribution of other team members is not included/evident in this draft. This draft is clear in its plans for contribution of an image. It is clearly stated that there are plans for dissection of the vocal anatomy of the chicken and photos will be taken after dissection. This draft is very clear on what parts of the article are planning on being edited and what areas of the article the edits will fit nicely into. This draft does link to other relevant pages. Another page that could be linked is Songbird. Elephantidae123 (talk) 02:16, 3 April 2022 (UTC)