User talk:Justinkui83/sandbox

Hey Justin,

Your article about healthy diets was a great read! The information you provided on various conditions was very well written and from a neutral point of view. It seems like you used plenty of great resources and citations as well.

To add onto your article, I think you should add a See Also Section, along with building out the epilepsy section more. You should add more specific conditions as well and more specific diets that lead to a healthy lifestyle.

I think one other thing you can do to improve your article is breaking out paragraphs more to emphasize different points. Sometimes it can get a little jumbled if you don't break out the paragraphs.

Best, Ken