User talk:Justmatko/sandbox

Article Evaluation
Nice analysis, Justin. You do a good job of highlighting the concerns with the JSTOR article. Contact Wikipedia to see what their policies are.Carolyncunningham (talk) 20:50, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

Citing Sources
Great range of sources, Justin. I am glad that you find my article helpful! I love that you will include information on bots-such an important topic.Carolyncunningham (talk) 21:44, 11 April 2019 (UTC)

Justin Wiens' Peer Review
Hi Justin,

I really appreciate that you are changing the beginning section of the Mutual Shaping article. Looking at the article now, I don't understand what mutual shaping is from the introduction section. Your draft for the introduction provides a much clearer definition.

Your second and third changes are excellent. You provide really great examples of mutual shaping in your explanation of the shift from an industrial society to agricultural society and how the telephone is also an example of mutual shaping. I might consider changing the title of the section from "Early Examples" to simply "Examples" because early is somewhat of a subjective term. For some readers, the example of the telephone won't qualify as an early example but a modern example.

Great idea to add "The Negative Impact" section. Do you think your first sentence in that section is an objective fact? Is there a source that verifies that smartphones were created to make the user's life easier and more convenient? Just wondering because it could be argued that smartphones were created for a number of other reasons, and it's hard to know the motives of the people who actually created smartphones unless they specifically stated why they created them.

You asked if the idea of sociotechnical systems should be incorporated into the page, and I think it doesn't necessarily fit. That page explains that "technical" refers to societal and organizational structures, and not necessarily material technology. There could be a way to make it fit, but I don't think there is a need for it on the mutual shaping page.

Awesome work overall and I enjoyed reading your draft and ideas!

Best, Justin Jwienszag (talk) 21:42, 18 April 2019 (UTC)