User talk:Justo Mendoza

In accordance with the guidelines of assignment #1 I am writing on your talk page. I am happy to be working with you again. Good luck in the course. Caitlinmcgrath (talk) 04:45, 27 January 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (January 29)
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MatthewVanitas (talk) 21:12, 29 January 2015 (UTC)

Crowfoot
The Crowfoot article looks pretty good! Thanks for your work. May I suggest consolidating the references section? It's quite long with repeated use of the same book. You might take a look at the citations on the Theodore Roosevelt article to see how a heavily cited sources are consolidated. Also, ISBN numbers on the books would be useful. You might want to use, for your citations. They would generally go inside of the. (I multi-posted this message on the recent Crowfoot editors talk pages) Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 07:54, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Thanks Jim! I took your suggestion and looked at the Roosevelt article for reference. I consolidated the sections of the article that I was responsible for. Thanks again. Justo Mendoza (talk) 14:10, 7 April 2015 (UTC)