User talk:Jvalin95

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Hello, Jvalin95, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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You have an overdue training assignment.
Please complete the assigned training modules. --Valerielopes (talk) 00:48, 8 November 2018 (UTC)

Notes 2
Hi! The changes you made look good - my only true notes at this point would be to be careful of sourcing (I found that Tubefilter is an iffy source since the last time we spoke) and to be careful that the writing isn't too casual. One thing that I'd recommend would be to simplify the mention of Paul buying a house. Most of the finer details are kind of seen as too much detail for Wikipedia. I think that tweaking the sentences to read "In October 2017 Paul bought his first house, one acre property, in Encino, California for 6.55 million U.S dollars." would be good, since it gets the gist across without going into too much detail. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:20, 5 December 2018 (UTC)