User talk:Jvane002/sandbox

Jvane002's peer review
Suggestion: use wiki code, == Heading text ==, to create a heading, this also helps create a small table of contents for your page. Adding a name to the article as a heading would help your reader find your article sooner for the final draft. Overall I believe this first draft is well done, I suggest using more sources only because Wikipedia is very picky on sources. I also suggest the author adds a heading to article. I believe this first draft is good because it is well organized and uses a neutral tone.
 * Organization: Well organized, I can tell what each section is about and what I will be reading.
 * Balanced coverage: Everything from the list that was provided is covered. Overall I believe article has a well balanced coverage of the artist, Bibiana Suarez.
 * Neutral Content: The author does not use a positive, negative or convincing tone throughout the article. Very straightforward.
 * Sources: The sources are credible and the author cites where they got the information.

Alanis Vargas (talk) 23:30, 7 May 2019 (UTC)