User talk:Jwinch17/sandbox

Jacob, I really liked that you decided to practice your citation "coding" when providing your game plan to add to the article. You seem to have a decent grasp of the interface, so please help Dean when you have a chance. --Dr AB Swan (talk) 17:03, 16 February 2019 (UTC)

Jacob, for editing your article, you may already have this as part of your plan or in another document, but here are some ideas for you as you continue to edit: 1. In the history section, there is a mention of Type A, and I think that if you plan to keep this information, it would be helpful to include information about the origins of Type B. If you cannot find this information, perhaps you could (at the very least) state that there is a lack of information about this subject, just to provide that information to a reader. 2. The title of the Wikipedia page includes the word "theory", but the definition suggests it is a hypothesis. I could have missed this information, but I think it would be helpful to the reader to either: state that the two terms are used interchangeably or choose one term and stick with it for consistency. 3. For me, the definition is a bit unclear. Is the theory a theory regarding the labelling of the personalities? Or is it about the personalities in relation to a person's physical health or mental state? The mention of cardiovascular health is pretty extensive in this article, and if that's not what the theory is referring to, then I think this could be confusing, as it essentially dominates the article. 4. In general, I think it would be interesting to see more information about Type B, as there seems to be more information about Type A. Additionally, I think it would be beneficial to include a more detailed description of interactions between the two personalities; perhaps examples would be cool!!! Overall, these are my major suggestions or ideas. You may already have a plan for some or all of them, and if so, great! If not, and you would like any clarity on something I said, feel free to reach out and ask me! This is a super interesting topic! Best of luck with editing!Camimitchell35 (talk) 06:35, 18 March 2019 (UTC)