User talk:Jxu2881/sandbox

Should probably find a better way to word the first sentence of his personal life, that his parents were born in Shanghai, or just delete that part all together because that isn't really important. Good use of examples that he has created, helps keep notability

I like your article so far. The only comments that I would have would be to elaborate more in the opening paragraph and also to possibly add an overview of some or all of the essays and works by Tan Lin. Cappy8118 (talk) 21:55, 6 October 2015 (UTC)

I like that you have many links and references, but I agree with the last user. Maybe not add an overview of all of his essays, but at least give his work "Heath" a sub heading. Subheadings make your article look more organized and more formal, you should use them whenever you can. Mht5627 (talk) 22:12, 6 October 2015 (UTC)