User talk:Jyanken/sandbox

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I also think that the information you added was helpful to better understand the story of Ukemochi. One thing I might consider adding is a bit more information on the other gods associated with her. She is the goddess of food, but those not familiar with the other wouldn't know what they are the gods of or how they fit in the larger god hierarchy. Also, if there is any information on how Ukemochi is currently influencing Japanese culture that may be interesting to put in there. All and all I think you have done a good job. Ckamikawa (talk) 04:29, 9 November 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think the additional information for the story of Ukemochi is very needed. It is very well-explained and detailed. The only I can think of is maybe adding come connection with pop culture? I haven't see any kind of interpretation of this god in anime myself so I don't know if the interpretation even exist in the first place but this is just a suggestion of a possible direction.