User talk:K.L.Neigel

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael G. Sullivan (March 12)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 02:17, 12 March 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael G. Sullivan (April 9)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 22:04, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael G. Sullivan (April 10)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 01:51, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael G. Sullivan (April 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Sulfurboy (talk) 02:55, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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K.L.Neigel (talk) 03:27, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Hello, Can you please let me know what specific sentences you do not like so I can fix them? Thankyou.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael G. Sullivan (April 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Robert McClenon were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:21, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Let's start over
Okay, so, things got screwed up with Woerich. Sorry about that mess.

The draft you have made is not ready to be an article.

And the article you submitted as an attempted workaround is not ready either.

This is going to stay as a draft until either it is ready - as decided by other editors who actually understand what they are doing - or until it is deleted (which will happen either when you request it, or leave it untouched for more than 6 months; that said, such deleted pages can be restored upon request).

What you have submitted needs a lot of work. If we were to leave this available as an article, it would have the potential to mislead people into thinking that something this far below standard is acceptable.

I apologize for the inconvenience. DS (talk) 19:03, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi User:DragonflySixtyseven I do not understand why Woerich copied my draft and made it into an article. I had no knowledge this occurred, or why he would do this.

This article is very similar to other articles of those in similar fisheries roles (i.e. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steven_J._Cooke). Would you be able to point out what specific sentences I need to re-write so I can fix them? This biography was done as part of a course for school where we are required to write a wikipedia biography for a leading Canadian conservation scientist. AS part of the biography I mostly used web-sources, but also asked Michael Sullivan via his government email to answer a few questions for information I was unable to find online. I chose to do a biography on him as he is a leading Alberta fishing conservation scientist. Thank you for your help.

AfC notification: Draft:Michael G. Sullivan has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Michael G. Sullivan. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 01:34, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael G. Sullivan has been accepted
 Michael G. Sullivan, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!  DGG ( talk ) 08:59, 12 April 2020 (UTC)