User talk:K.bentzen1

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Jacklyn's Peer Review
HI,

The article regarding workplace relationships starts strong with a clear lead section. However, the article becomes very wordy in terms of length from sentence, and paragraph structure. I would suggest shortening the section on friendship, and trimming information from the sections after for better balance. Eliminate language like 'studies show...' with precise, and up-to-date information with a link to an additional source. Further readings could use updated sources, as the three provided are well dated .Be careful with word choice as the audience for this content varies of educational background, so words like multifaceted, or detriment may be swapped with more common language. Links worked well when tested. I appreciated how to the point your article was, our article going a bit everywhere with historical context, and legislation etc. The most important change to do would be specificity, and cleaning up punctuation.

71.95.70.61 (talk) 04:39, 4 April 2018 (UTC)