User talk:K223an/sandbox

Feedback on Draft
Revisions necessary. This is a great start! Here is what you need to do to make it ready for mainspace: Chronophoto (talk) 19:03, 17 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Expand the prose from ~200 words to 500 words or more.
 * Copyedit the text carefully. For example, “Film maker” should be “filmmaker.” Film titles should be in italics, not in quotation marks. Put footnote numbers after the period. Etc.
 * Emphasis her achievements as a filmmaker before her family life.
 * Fix the reference section. There are several visible errors there.