User talk:KAPARN1609/Soil sealing

Possible improvements
I would suggest an inclusion of free-sourced imagery to aid description Babatunde Fafunwa (talk) 15:34, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

Minor edit to the first section not in the bold font. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Babatunde Fafunwa (talk • contribs) 15:56, 8 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your feedback. I'll add related images if i get it. KAPARN1609 (talk) 16:21, 12 April 2024 (UTC)

Peer Review
- I think adding photos and graphs would really help improve your article and explain some of the more confusing parts of the process

- Making headings and sub-headings to re-organize the topics a little further SarahEnviro (talk) 15:48, 8 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your feedback. I have rearranged the headings as you mentioned. KAPARN1609 (talk) 16:22, 12 April 2024 (UTC)

Peer Review
Overall great article so far! I really enjoyed learning about this subject! Here are a few minor changes I would make:

- I like the fact that the "soil sealing" and " surface sealing" at the beginning is bolded however I would also include the word "soil" to be bolded as well; and take off the bold it the rest of your article.

-I like the use of the hyperlinks you added to your article but would even include some more such as the word degradation, biodiversity, biodiversity loss, and Walloon Region

- I like the headers you have of introduction: Negative impacts of soil sealing, and soil unsealing however I would remove the header of "Article body"

- Instead of having the negative impacts as point form I would make all those points as sub-headers and have the little paragraphs follow within the sub-headers Liv.spatol (talk) 16:07, 8 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your comments. I have applied all the changes you mentioned. KAPARN1609 (talk) 16:18, 12 April 2024 (UTC)