User talk:KBish87/sandbox

Hi Kayla, a precise description of the role of a textile conservator within a museum and the types of items they work on. I love that you mention education, as that is a huge part of becoming a conservator. Firstly, I would recommend adding links to items you mention in your article, even those as general as conservator or organic chemistry can be linked to other wiki articles or outside sources. You only utilized one source in your citations, where I think you could have benefited from more. I think it would be beneficial to add more specifics about the types of work a textile conservator, and conservators in general do. In addition to treating objects as you listed, they have to document their data through treatment reports and photo documentation. Also, listing the different programs that provide textile conservation higher education may be beneficial for readers. Overall I think your entry is well organized but could use a little more substance. Ktrotter88 (talk) 01:15, 3 March 2016 (UTC) Kendall

Kayla - Good collections role you've chosen - there's definitely a lot to cover here. I think your organization and categories are spot on - job duties and education are definitely the big things to know for this collections role. However, I agree that you need several more sources to flesh this article out. In particular I think the job duties and responsibilities section needs some realiable Inline citations. By using more sources, I think you would easily write a complete article as you seem to be heading in the right direction now. Chels talks (talk) 17:16, 3 March 2016 (UTC)