User talk:KCterm/Gender inequality in China/Wrig36 Peer Review

Peer review completed
Completed the peer review! Wrig36 (talk) 22:20, 17 February 2024 (UTC)

Peer Review Response
Hello!

Thank you for the thoughtful peer review. I appreciate you pointing out the issues with the lead/intro section in regards to the one-child policy. I plan on changing the words used to create a more accurate description and citation.

I’m wondering if I should keep the ‘historical agricultural presence’ part in the draft. I can expand on it, but then I feel like it might turn into a different topic. I’m thinking about taking that part out, and keeping everything else.

Thank you for pointing out to reword some of my draft. I agree, replacing son with male would make it more cohesive. I will definitely take your pointers on reducing some of the redundance throughout the draft.

Thank you for the great peer review and pointing out what needs to be changed! KCterm (talk) 20:05, 20 February 2024 (UTC)