User talk:KGundred/Bisexual erasure

Great job in adding so much information on this topic. The only thing is under the academia tab the sentence "Melissa Smith and Elizabethe Payne state there are several instances where faculty have been silent when it comes to bullying of LGBTQ students." seems a tad bit out of place, since you are talking about it in general how the LGBTQ community is starting to have more representation in schools, it seems like this sentence was thrown in to kind of show there's still a battle there but I think it would do much better if you were to either add more information about it maybe an instance or remove it.

Maybe even just saying even with this recognition in schools some teachers still do not accept or stand up for students. Does that make sense? Otherwise great contribution.