User talk:KHIS230

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Hello, KHIS230, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Response
Hi! I saw that you posted to my talk page about the draft. I took a look - it looks pretty good. I made a couple of tweaks for flow and style. I think it's ready to move live, but I would definitely recommend finding additional sourcing. The page relies very heavily on the same couple of sources, so it would be good to find others if possible. That would be something you could move once you move the work into the live article, however. You can do this by moving the work into the main article in small chunks. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:01, 1 June 2020 (UTC)