User talk:KMCC448/Sexual stimulation

I think you've done a great job of including stimulations for people with various sexual preferences. The original page lacks that and it is important to include that so that many people can have access to knowledge about them.

'Individuals who identify as Sapiosexuals can come be Cis-gendered' - this might be a type but just wanted to point out that this sentence is not really clear. I think it would be nice to have another link or citation backing the claims made in the second halves of the sections on Graysexual and Autosexual Sexual stimulation. It would be interesting to see more about the Internal stimulation: excitation-transfer theory of sexual arousal, possibly another example of an activity with residual arousal that can be turned into sexual arousal. - Mofadesewa Atanda

MAderinsola (talk) 23:54, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Kayla Cattouse-Cowans- Sexual Stimulation (Peer Review)

Draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:KMCC448/Sexual_stimulation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Current Article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sexual_stimulation

Evaluate the drafted changes:

I think that it would really supplement the Asexual Sexual Stimulation section if you started the second paragraph out by listing all the sexualities that fall under the Ace spectrum, and then went on to focus on demisexuality (in addition to demisexual). Since graysexual falls under the ace spectrum, it might help the organization of your article to move that section to be under the Asexual Stimulation section (maybe make it its own paragraph like demisexual).

I noticed that you’re still working on it, but a suggestion I had was that you might want to expand on the section on Sapiosexual Sexual Stimulation with more information on the actual sexual practice of sapiosexual identifying individuals or how sexual stimulation works in this instance, since this might be something that not a lot of people know about.

Finally, in the autosexual stimulation section, it might be helpful to explain the difference between orgasm and climax because this might be something that a person that has not taken our class might not know the difference between. It could help the reader understand better.

The edits that you have added are very well written and concise! So far they seem to mainly focus on sexual stimulation in regards to different sexualities and I think these are valuable additions to the wikipedia page. Good job!

Srehman07 (talk) 02:10, 2 December 2021 (UTC) Saffa Rehman (PSYC 345)