User talk:KMCC448/sandbox

I think that your heading in the right place for your wiki page. The evidence you've provided so far really helps strengthen your point. You also explain the significance of your evidence which helps the readers see your point.For example in your section were you talk about the Negative effects you proceed to say there are a few studies that try to prove same sex parents came out with negative effects. You kinda just breifly mention it but you don't exactly show it. I recommend you show these studies talk about them what was the focus and what did they prove what was shown. I think you need more evidence to support your page in order to back up your topic, it will greatly stengthen your page. Try to find more sources and articles to support your page. Also I think you made a small error in one of yout titles I think you meant to put by and put my instead.But great job so far I'm looking forward to reading more. -LP

Looking at the original article there is already a fair amount of very important content. I think what you are writing about the effects on the children is incredibly important. Your sources are very good and outline very well the points you make. I think it would be helpful to back up some of your points a little more. For example the sentence that reads "Some have debated that when children aren't raised in a 2 parent household with a mother & father, that they are worse off. Other studies have claimed that these children are just fine without having parents of opposite sex." doesn't have any source. The claim of some studies and other studies needs to be backed up with some citation. I think the main thing I would recommend is elaborating on all your points and making sure specific claims are cited. This topic is super interesting and I think you've done a great job of finding good sources and writing out the main concepts behind them. Can't wait to see where it ends up. -AES