User talk:KNawar1

Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 22:01, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia&.
 * To edit the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the help desk, via real time chat with helpers, or on the [ reviewer's talk page]
 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 22:24, 9 July 2012 (UTC)

Vodafone International Services
Hello, I see you rejecting my submission because its looks like an ad to which is against policy for you as Wiki-Admins. Will you please assist me and delete what ever you see it a must so I can publish my artical ??

Kind Greetings, Khaled Nawar. Signing comment for user:KNawar1


 * Hiyas Khaled,


 * I fear this is not a mere matter of removing or rephrasing a few promotional lines. Instead the entire article is an advertisement and would require a fundamental / complete rewrite to have any chance of passing trough the article's for creating procedure. I only just noticed that the article content is actually copied from this link which is a copyright violating, necessitating a removal of the current article for legal reasons.


 * The only advice i can give you right now is having a look at an article which was accepted - such as Pearson's Candy Company and Pike Place Fish Market - and use these as an example to model your own article after. Do note that you cannot directly copy text from external sources, since that is a copyright violation. Excirial ( Contact me, Contribs ) 11:06, 11 July 2012 (UTC)