User talk:KWC-YYZ/sandbox1

feedback from Elysia
Hi here's some feedback for you!
 * "In 2007, edited Sex and the Brain for MIT Press." this is a fragment/incomplete sentence because it's missing a subject
 * I've added a few "citation needed" tags to content that is missing a reference for verifiability.
 * the lead is uncited, which is fine if all of the content is present in the body of the article and cited
 * No content should be in the lead that isn't present in the body, because the lead should summarize (MOS:LEAD). Try adding this content into the body somewhere with some citations.
 * I did some minor things such as moving a ref after punctuation and adding in a missing period, which you can see in the sandbox history . You can compare versions to see exactly what I changed and where

I hope this feedback is helpful! Talk to you later today! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:13, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Feedback from Will (Wiki Ed)
Hi - You have done some great work on this article. Specifically, I think you have done a wonderful job clearly detailing the nature of Dr. Einstein's research. Once you move the content live, I would consider adding a Category about her work examining gender disparity in clinical health research so that she will show up in related articles. I'm not sure which category would be best, but if you search a little I'm positive you'll find a good match. As an aside, I love how the current live article as an info box containing her institution affiliation and thesis! I wish all of the articles we worked on had info boxes! Great job! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:19, 28 November 2018 (UTC)