User talk:Kabdelnoor/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
The hyphen you removed from "second-largest city" was correct, but you also see this phrase used without a hyphen, so either form is acceptable. The rest of the changes were needed and helpful. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:41, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
Your sources look relevant and reputable. Go ahead and add them to the article within the next week. Just be sure to include the full bibliographic information rather than a URL. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:52, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Great job. You're done with this assignment. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:15, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead to "Transport in South Africa"
Go ahead and post a draft of your lead within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:40, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * This is a decent draft for a lead that wasn't easy to write. You should remove the comment about a bus system being "tremendously helpful" because it deviates from a neutral point of view. You can still say that it helped reduce traffic elsewhere because that's factual information. Then you can add the lead to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:56, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Good job adding the lead and internal links. One more thing: "no hand signals" should be "hand signals" (meaning, "hand signals are forbidden"). Go ahead and delete the "no" in the article and you're done with this assignment. Do this in the next three days. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:58, 28 April 2018 (UTC)