User talk:Kacap2015/sandbox

Hey Kristy, It's time to edit each other's pages, so I'm going to do that on this page now, and you should still be able to access what it looked like before and see what I added or took away by looking at the "View History" tab. Happy Editing! CrayfishStudent (talk) 20:01, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Ok, so I edited a lot of your references, took out the scientific paper notation, and streamlined the ones you used by giving them nicknames so they don't show up in your references multiple times. Made a few grammatical changes, but I don't have much to edit other than the references, because I don't know how I can edit the content much without knowing about Alligators. I think you should add more citations, (not new papers, but cite the other ones more often) at least to every other sentence, so we know where each bit of information is coming from. And it's pretty unobtrusive in a wiki page as just a little number, without writing the author names and year like you had before. Also, I made a note in the page because I couldn't find the Ox and Rahman paper in your references, so I couldn't fix that one. Keep up the good work! :)CrayfishStudent (talk) 20:50, 16 March 2015 (UTC)