User talk:KadenKnecht

Welcome!
Hello, KadenKnecht, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback
Hi. A few initial thoughts
 * You should draft your article at User:KadenKnecht/sandbox instead of User talk:KadenKnecht/sandbox. You can, for example, use the visual editor in your sandbox, but not on the talk page.
 * What page do you want to work on? I'm not sure precisely which page you plan to expand.
 * It looks like you are behind on your training modules. Please ensure you complete them. You should be using inline citations, for example, instead of author-date format. The training modules explain how to do this.
 * Start with a lead section that summarizes all the major points of the article. Keep "background" sections to a minimum by linking to other articles that cover those topics. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 03:54, 25 October 2018 (UTC)