User talk:Kadunnett/sandbox

Edit by Ecpleshk
Hello Kate I have read your wiki page and your outline for the topic of Masking.

You have thought through your article thoroughly and have found some good looking sources.

I would be sure to add the items you have of the history to the page. I would also make sure not to focus all the time on the history aspect as it may not relate to the personality.

That being said I would add on to the section of "Situations" under "Causes" and add where this situation most often occurs under setting such as where people experience this. I have noticed you have done some research under children and that seems very interesting to me! Looking forward to reading that section.

Finally i would add a bit more on to the consequences such as long term effects.

Overall very interesting topic and detailed plan, good luck with your project.