User talk:Kafkanaut/Yokkaichi asthma/Hillmap Peer Review

Peer review response 1 - Hillmap
They suggested summarizing more about the environmental effects in the lead, expanding on the legal action section, and naming notable people related to the disease. I will be following all of these suggestions, as they provided good points on where new information can be added to the article. They also provided a source I can use to find more on survivors, which was greatly appreciated. The only thing they suggested that I will probably not do is combine the sections for the petrochemical plants. I have just found more information on each, and I think dividing the section that way is helpful for showing the history. Overall, their review was very helpful.

Kafkanaut 01:24, 14 April 2020 (UTC)