User talk:Kafreeman/sandbox

Ian fleming peer review
I think that you do a good job of bringing all of the information together in a clear way. I like that you have a lot of references and I think that backs up your findings well. I would bold the header that you have so that they stand out more. I would also read through and make sure that all of the scientific words you use is defined so that people reading the paper have a better understanding. Other than that I think that you have a great article.