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Article Evaluation
Notes about observations: U.S. Immigration and Customs Enforcement https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/U.S._Immigration_and_Customs_Enforcement#Criticisms

I chose this article because it was relevant to the topic of immigration that our group was initially exploring in class.

Also, deaths in detention section was not updated. There have been multiple deaths reported in the past year that are not represented in the article. The talk section actually voices these same concerns - under "NPOV dispute - needs information on criticism", the author provides sources on reports of recent conditions/how things have changed under the Trump administration. I was reallu surprised that the article was criticized for being extreme Pro-ice, I thought there was a major lack of information that portrayed the effect of ICE, but I didn't think that what content that was already present was very biased. Aparently the article is protected and was apart of a Wiki education assignment.
 * Everything in the article is relevant, however, some things were distracting. In the first paragraph, the word "alien" is used, which surprised me because that term is somewhat politically charged in the US.
 * The article seemed neutral to me, but the criticisms section was a bit underdeveloped. I believe the criticisms section is underrepresented, as there are such a variety and high number of criticisms against the organization, not just sexual assault. There are so many reports of deportees being kept from regular sustenance and sanitary conditions, I wonder why those didn't make it to the article.
 * The links I checked worked, and they did support the claims in the article.
 * The information is coming from reputable news sources, however, some are notoriously left-leaning, like MSNBC.
 * As mentioned above, there are statistics missing from the article that convey the number of deaths in recent years and the what conditions detainees live in. There is a whole online movement called #AbolishIce, that could work in the criticisms section or a social media section.

Choose a Topic

 * 1) Article 1: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/U.S._Immigration_and_Customs_Enforcement
 * What could be improved: Social media section added, statistics about deaths in deportation centers, criticisms of detainee living conditions.


 * 1) Article 2: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trump_travel_ban
 * What could be improved: Seems really underdeveloped, could be supported with a social media impact/movement section, the current status of the exec orders mentioned, the list of countries involved, and any sort of quantifiable impact its had since then.