User talk:Kai Su?/Archives/2007/July

Spartan Army
You've been doing some great work on the article but, if I may make some comments to improve your editing: , unless you need it.
 * Use a more formal, encyclopedic tone in writing. For example, don't say "the local Judas". Say "a traitor" or "a local traitor". See the Manual of Style for some tips.
 * Do not use large images, as it takes away from the text. Images are to augur the text and should not interfere with it.
 * Try to find a few more sources and cite them appropriately. See WP:SOURCE for examples on how to properly cite. I would not want the article to be taken as original research.
 * There isn't a need to overwikify an article. For example, you don't need to wikilink "man", unless it serves a purpose.
 * If you have wikilinked a term/name/etc. earlier in the text, you don't need to do so again, unless it serves a purpose.
 * When wikilinking, check to make sure that the link goes to the article you want and not a disambig page.
 * Try to avoid using HTML markup, if unneeded. For example, you don't have to use

Like I said, you're doing amazing work and you have what it takes to become a great contributor to Wikipedia. -- Kimon talk 12:53, 25 May 2007 (UTC)

Thanks Kai Su? 17:57, 25 May 2007 (UTC). There is a word mora which I made link to the disambig page because that is the only one which actually defines it!


 * I saw that you removed the WPGR banner from the article, any particular reason? I've put it back for now as it is indeed within the scope of the project. -- Kimon talk 22:18, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

OOOPS, Accident!  Kai Su? My Talk Page 10:08, 1 July 2007 (UTC)

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