User talk:Kaitlin 121/sandbox

Peer Review by Sarah Cohn

Kaitlin added a lot of quality information about transfeminism. She did a good job of backing up her information as she did with the case of Kimberly Nixon. I think her contribution to the article would benefit from citing information about this case and added some quotes that prove her statements. She could also expand a little more on the relationship between the case and transfeminism. Sarahcohn (talk) 18:05, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

You added many good examples and your sources are reliable and not biased in any way. Digging deeper into Kimberly Nixon's case and into the idea that transgender women struggle to be accepted by cis-gendered women will benefit your righting and make it even stronger! Great start! --Dresnick95 (talk) 04:03, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

I think your editing is very informational! I like how you included two scholarly sources of about transfeminism, maybe dig into deeper arguments of either or both articles. One possible way might be looking into Graham Mayeda's argument and provide more detailed reason about why cisgender feminists feel threatened by male-to-female transgender feminists according to Mayeda. Good job and keep working!--Iriszhao0619 (talk) 06:55, 1 March 2018 (UTC)