User talk:Kaixunzhong/sandbox

You do a fantastic job in making clear concise descriptions of the technical aspects of your topic. There is an exhaustive amount of description here and I think it clears any confusion up. In being critical I'd say add a little more following your quote. Other than that your all set. Nice Job! Gmcoyne (talk) 23:25, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

You described very clearly about the gamma database project. You did a very good job on trying to tell what this project is focusing on and what it is trying to improve compare to the others. I will suggest you use more sources of information and try to describe a more about why this project is important.Yochoy (talk) 23:46, 12 November 2016 (UTC)Yochoy

go back and either write more about "Database Machines" or "Back End Processors" use this entry as a sample https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Database — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ctysick (talk • contribs) 19:29, 1 December 2016 (UTC)