User talk:Kajolrachelle/sandbox

In the beginning of the lead paragraph it suggest that Eichelberger organized for black woman. It would be helpful to expand on the subject of what exactly she organized. I also propose to add who she herself was influenced by, or if she influenced the work of others, such as iconic figures of Black feminism or maybe the civil rights movement. Student melissa (talk) 19:30, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Amena1015 (talk) 07:29, 27 April 2018 (UTC)== Peer Review- Angie ==

I would try to incorporate the importance of the two groups she was involved with to current thoughts or ideologies of present day Black feminist or even Black women who have contributed to the feminist movement without really identifying themselves as one. I would also try to incorporate a bit more information as to why it is important to talk about this individual in your lead paragraph.

Melissa, thank you for your feedback! I can definitely incorporate influences into the "background" paragraph and her influence on others' work in the "impact" paragraph! Thanks!

Angie, Thank you for your feedback! I agree with the advice on the lead paragraph, I plan to expand on that. And I can add a new paragraph on current thoughts/ideologies that parallel to Eichelberger. Thanks!

Kajolrachelle (talk) 04:29, 1 May 2018 (UTC)RACHELLE SHANKAR