User talk:Kalebale/sandbox

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Nice start, Kale! Now work to edit this for greater precision. You want to say the most you can as clearly as possible with the fewest words. Also, be sure that you are saying exactly what you mean. For example, I am not sure what you mean by "moral compass to success it can en route." Also, I am not sure that "students falling short of the intellectual potential are failing to exercise self discipline"is quite what Duckworth's work shows. Isn't it more that those who are able to exercise self-discipline are generally more successful? Finally, be sure to edit for proper use of capitalization and such. --Jbdolphin (talk) 06:07, 12 April 2021 (UTC)