User talk:Kalras/sandbox

Peer Review Bordeaux Cathedral
Good job on the information provided in the article, not only is there a description of the building, but also a reasoning behind the particular feature. For example the purpose of the stained glass windows facing east or the flying buttresses. The organization also is good with the fact that it goes through the more notable features of the building. For example starting with the most prominent stained glass, then structure of the building and then the doors. The piece's content is neutral and doesn't really imply any sense of favoritism. The references added all seem credited due to the fact that they are all published books and they all focus on the type of architecture that the cathedral is.

Some things that could've been added: More information about the building like the towers and the layout of the building; having some of the more technical terms like flying buttresses, ribbed vaults, tympanum, and other terms linked to other wikipedia pages because everyone might not know about them and it would be easier to learn that way, lastly some citing of the material to which source so if someone would like to learn more about that certain part they could seek that source out.

Overall a good contribution with a good analysis and deduction of the pieces of the building, just would like some more Josefjacobs32 (talk) 03:09, 11 December 2018 (UTC)