User talk:Kalsoomnawaz

November 2014
Your addition has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted text, or images borrowed from other websites, or printed material without a verifiable license; such additions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images&mdash;you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. lTopGunl (talk) 14:40, 10 November 2014 (UTC)

Hello, I'm TopGun. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Chief of Army Staff (Pakistan), but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so! If you need guidance on referencing, please see the referencing for beginners tutorial, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. lTopGunl (talk) 14:42, 10 November 2014 (UTC)

November 2014
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. You appear to be engaged in an edit war with one or more editors. Although repeatedly reverting or undoing another editor's contributions may seem necessary to protect your preferred version of a page, on Wikipedia this is usually seen as obstructing the normal editing process, and often creates animosity between editors. Instead of edit warring, please discuss the situation with the editor(s) involved and try to reach a consensus on the talk page.

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COAS General Raheel Sharif
This is an automated message from CorenSearchBot. I have performed a web search with the contents of COAS General Raheel Sharif, and it appears to include material copied directly from http://www.pakistannewsday.com/profile-general-raheel-sharif/.

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Your recent edits
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Thank you. --SineBot (talk) 04:42, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

Please see things globally not locally. The article Raheel Sharif is already well written and referenced. if you want to add new things you are most welcome but don't just change the style of writing which is already fine. kind regards. 119.158.13.146 (talk) 05:47, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

The info in this article is most latest and up to the date, it is not just style of writing. The picture of General Raheel Sharif in this article is with stash and hence qualify him as Chief of Army Staff of Pakistan. --Kalsoomnawaz (talk) 07:17, 11 November 2014 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of COAS General Raheel Sharif


A tag has been placed on COAS General Raheel Sharif requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the article or image appears to be a clear copyright infringement. This article or image appears to be a direct copy from rv blatant copyvio from https://www.ispr.gov.pk/front/main.asp?o=t-chiefs&dept=coas. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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Raheel Sharif
I do not believe that the text is free to use for the following reasons.
 * The disclaimers only appear to allow attributed reproduction of the content; there appears to no provision to allow changes to the text or commercial use, as required by the CC BY-SA 3.0 License  and the    GFDL licenses that Wikipedia needs
 * Despite the disclaimers, one site is clearly tagged Copyrights 2014. ISPR. All Rights Reserved and the other Pakistan Army Web Portal Copyright © 2009-2014 which suggests that they do not see its content as public domain. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient. But in any case the copyrighted text is far too promotional to be useful for Wikipedia's purposes, so there would not be any point in your jumping through all the hoops that are required.

In any case, it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include: hails from a martial stock... battle hardened and renowned... had embraced Shahadat... the prestigious School... graduating with distinction... has had the honor... the prestigious Royal College of Defence Studies, United Kingdom.. I don't believe that Pakistan Army pages are 'independent verifiable sources for their own commanders, they read like press releases.

He is obviously notable enough for and article, but it needs to be in your own words and with independent references Jimfbleak - talk to me?  06:55, 12 November 2014 (UTC)