User talk:Kalynnmc/sandbox

Hey everyone my name is Kalynn and my major is chemistry.

I think your rough draft is great because you were very thorough with your findings and also made it very clear where evrything would be on your article. Kjackson006 (talk) 03:16, 2 November 2018 (UTC)Kjackson

Jaisha's Peer Review
- Hey I'm Jaisha and I'm reviewing your article

- The first thing i noticed is have a lot of details which is really good and your topic is similar to mine (Occupational Sexism) which is cool because I can possibly use your sources to find some extra information and vice versa.

- The use of citations in your article is great because it shows you have information to back up your article but I would add your citations in your article as footnotes so that it can be easier for the reader to find your sources.

- Your 10 points are well organized and I like how you start talking about the origin before jumping into the topic. I think you should also add some more information about the two topics: Gender roles at home and Nigerian so that you can have a balance between how much information is in each section of your article

- Overall, your article looks good with a lot of information that correlates to the topic (especially the quotations) and I like your topic!