User talk:Kam4441

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Hello, Kam4441, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback for annotated bibliography
Nice start on your annotated bibliography, and you're doing a good job of paying attention to the strengths and weaknesses of each study and their relevance in terms of supporting or refuting your controversy. You may want to find more systematic review or meta-analyses (try the article type filters in PubMed) or books to bolster your sources. Let us know if you have questions! Camand74 (talk) 19:03, 12 April 2018 (UTC)

Good job adding a meta-analysis, paying attention to potential biases, and finding a policy article. Looking forward to reading your paragraph! Camand74 (talk) 17:26, 8 May 2018 (UTC)