User talk:KamanaMS/Manodharma

Hi Kamna! I had the pleasure of reading your Manodharma (so cool, it sounds like South Indian Jazz!), which looks great - here are a few pieces of feedback as you keep updating:

Lead: The update you made explaning that this is South Indian classical music is very helpful for context. I think we are supposed to add a 'Content' section which lists the article's major sections. There's an example in the Editing Wikipedia Brochure on page 7. I beleive the easiest way to creat one would be to find an article with one (like the Hurrican Irene example) and copy the code for it. In this section it might be helpful to link to 'raga' and 'tala' for context - if they have their own pages. Also, I don't know if this belongs here or in another section, but one questions I had in the lead was where these types of performances take place or if they're specific to a certain type of occasion. It might make sense to add a section on this.

Content: Are there any well-known Manodharma performers? It there any histroy to Manodharma that's unique from the history of Carnatic music? Any typical settings for these performances?

References: It looks like you're looking for references for the last two paragraphs.

Organization: For the subheaders such as 'Types...' and 'Cultivating...' - I think these sections should be in the 'Heading' Font and then the article title is in the 'Page title' Font.

Tone and Balance: You draft feels very balanced and unbiased.

I think in general your additions definitely improve the article and expand on the topic. Some of the less-fmailiar topics may need more context, but it's going to be great!

JenPatt87 (talk) 18:50, 23 April 2021 (UTC)