User talk:Kamcghee/sandbox

= comments of instructor =

1)	Content

A)	Is the introductory section accessible for non-experts?

Yes.

B)	Do the contents of each section justify its length?

Yes.

C)	Are all the important terms/concepts linked to their respective Wikipedia pages for further references?

No. Such links are missing. For example, there is a page on United Nations Office on Drugs and Crime.

D)	Are the highlighted examples appropriate?

Yes.

E)	Is the content duplicative of any other content already on Wikipedia?

No

2)	Figures

A)	Are the figures original and of high quality?

No figures are provided.

B)	Are the figures informative and add to the text?

N/A

C)	Are the substance and/or protein structures chemically accurate, aligned, and easy to read? N/A

3)	References

A)	Are the references complete?

Yes. However, it would be nice to get references from non UNODC source.

B)	Are the references inclusive of non-journal sources?

Yes

4)	Overall Presentation

The group did produce three paragraphs on the proposed topic. The points were deducted for not including Figures and links. At the same time, this work is well written and does improve the existing article.

5)	Format and timing of submission

PN 02:25, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Suggestions from ChemLibrarian
Good job in expanding the article. A few suggestions here before you post it to the main space.


 * 1) Make sure your references are formatted better. Some of these references are Reports from government and some are web pages. You should at least have the title of the report and may be the agencies published listed as the author. More importantly, you need to list your Access Date with the URL. Please re-do the references to include them. Also, when you post, please do not delete the references originally cited with the existing paragraph. When you copied that paragraph into your sandbox, you did not copy it from the Edit Sources box and that's why the format didn't transfer.
 * 2) I would suggest you put the History section as a part of the Lead section. But both way works for now.
 * 3) For the added tables, I'd suggest you make a plot with three curves to show the index change, that would help you meet the figure requirements. And remember to add the data source citation to the caption of your figure. See this video and this tutorial Picture tutorial for more tips on how to upload, position and size your plot.

ChemLibrarian (talk) 17:38, 5 April 2016 (UTC)