User talk:Kamengrossi

Kamengrossi, you are invited on a Wikipedia Adventure!
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 * Hi Kamengrossi! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission.  I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
 * The Wikipedia Adventure Start Page
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-- 19:52, Wednesday, October 7, 2015 (UTC)

External links in article bodies
Hi Kamengrossi. I noticed you've added back external links in the text of your sandbox draft. We add citations to reliable sources in the body of any article, that verify the information. We don't add external links in the text. Generally, the only places external links appear in an article is in 1) the citation itself – if the source is online – 2) in the few external links in a dedicated external links section, and possibly 3) one link to the article subject's website in the infobox. So, for example, it is not proper to add "...Composer & Pianist Sonya Belousova and Composer Giona..." You might cite a source there that verified this information, but you would never have this external link in the text. Please see WP:NOTREPOSITORY, Manual of Style and chiefly External links. Best regards--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 02:09, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
 * P.S. This is your talk page and is for people to communicate with you. It is not the place to duplicate the draft article that's already in your sandbox, which is why I removed that when I wrote this post.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 02:09, 9 October 2015 (UTC)

Oooh!! I see! Ok, will fix all of those now. Thank you for bringing this up!

Kamengrossi (talk) 02:20, 9 October 2015 (UTC)

just removed them!

Kamengrossi (talk) 02:39, 9 October 2015 (UTC)