User talk:Kameron Biggs/sandbox

1.) I think that your article does meet Wikipedia's tone/neutrality standards. While I do think that you could have picked some different words whilst writing your article (like "ass" in reference to the animal hooves of the Sila; did you choose this because your sources specifically say "ass?") and there needs to be uniformity in how you refer to Sila and in your tenses, I do not think that this comes from a lack of neutrality.

2.) The one source cited, Dictionary of Islam, makes sense in context of your article being about an ancient Middle Eastern spirit. Since it's a tertiary source, I think that while it's good because there is less bias, it could be useful to include other sources (if possible) that can go into a little more detail that can also back up what you cited. Kameron Biggs (talk) 18:44, 5 November 2019 (UTC)