User talk:Kamillia Forbes/sandbox

I see you chose an article to evaluate, but the evaluation is not in your Sandbox. Did you put it somewhere else? BootsGordon (talk) 14:20, 10 September 2018 (UTC)

Audra DeLaney Peer Review
I agree with you Kamillia that this page definitely needs more information about Kevin McAleenan's personal life. Audradelaney (talk) 21:59, 2 October 2018 (UTC) I also think that using the Department of Homeland Security's website is a good place to look for information on him. Maybe when you go to the library, you could try using a database that will show you newspaper articles. I bet there are feature stories written about this man in some local newspaper somewhere. Obviously, you would have to make a call on how bias the article is before you chose to use it as a source, but it may be a good place to start looking for personal information. Also, looking where he went to college may be a good place to find information as well. I think this is a great page to work with because it does not seem like one that is going to get very heated over the course of the semester. Just a thought - he has served under Obama and Trump. Maybe there is more information out there about that that may be good to include here? Audradelaney (talk) 21:59, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

Erykah Gandy Peer Review
It's good that you're finding a lot of information on your person because his Wikipedia page is very scarce on the information side. You should check and see if he has his own website, I think that would be a good place to pull some information from as well, but it looks like you have a wide variety of places that you can find information. I think it would also be beneficial to know what he did prior to becoming the commissioner. You don't have to but I think this would help understand how he got to where he is. I think asking a librarian to help find some more personal info on your person is a great idea! They definitely know a lot more about researching than we do. Overall, I think you have a good basis for your wiki article!Erykah gandy (talk) 20:46, 6 October 2018 (UTC)

Rebecca Savinsky peer review
Hi Kamillia, I really liked your plan for what you will be adding to and am jealous that your person doesn't have information on them when mine is so filled! But back to content I think you have a clear and easily understandable plan and have a really good start. I liked that you provided links so I could see what specifically you were talking about and I enjoyed your topic! Rsavinsky (talk) 18:23, 10 October 2018 (UTC) Rsavinsky