User talk:Kamryngood/sandbox

Peer Review
Your draft looks so good!! Social Media is a good topic to do. If I were you I would talk about some of what we have learned in class like the dangers of social media. Also I would add some things about how it benefits us! You have a really good draft so far!!Taylorpease (talk) 14:23, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for the helpful suggestions! I will do my best to add some information that I have learned in class this semester and find information about how social media benefits us. Kamryngood (talk) 16:51, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

Article Draft
Kamryn, You have some good information in your draft, and your sources are all good. I think this reads more like an advice essay than an encyclopedia article, though. I suggest revising language to be more fact-based, then cite your sources when you use information from them. I think it's all here--it's a matter of tone and language.JAirhart 19:22, 25 March 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)

Thank you for your helpful information. I will revise my draft to make it sound like an encyclopedia article and to be more factual based. I will also be sure to cite my sources when I post my article so anyone who chooses to look at it will know the source is credible. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kamryngood (talk • contribs) 16:53, 4 April 2018 (UTC)