User talk:Kang Jerry

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The Wikipedia tutorial is a good place to start learning about Wikipedia. If you have any questions, see the help pages, add a question to the village pump or ask me on my talk page. By the way, you can sign your name on Talk and discussion pages using four tildes, like this: &#126;&#126;&#126;&#126; (the software will replace them with your signature and the date). Again, welcome! Dougweller (talk) 10:29, 5 July 2011 (UTC)

Your edits
Hi and welcome again, and thank you for your edits. A couple of points - at Jeremiah you added 'Holy Bible'. This was redundant and in any case we don't use the adjective 'holy' before Bible unless it's a quote (if there was a specific book called 'The Holy Bible' that might be another exception. And if you want to give the meaning of a word such as Zion that's often best in an etymology section and would also need a source (read WP:VERIFY and WP:RS. Thanks. Dougweller (talk) 10:32, 5 July 2011 (UTC)