User talk:KanonVNZ

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Hillstone Networks


A tag has been placed on Draft:Hillstone Networks, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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 * Hello, I checked and noticed that they deleted the draft that I published a few minutes ago, I wrote it objectively, following the Wikipedia guidelines, reviewing similar pages like this one: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fortinet, which being a famous brand and if it has advertising, can you help me improve if something failed? What should I improve? List everything, the ball where it is traded, its prizes, do not publish the services or anything because it would be advertising and I want it to have biographical content for this, connect annexes that demonstrate the trajectory etc. KanonVNZ (talk) 15:30, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
 * @Fancy Refrigerator KanonVNZ (talk) 21:04, 30 March 2023 (UTC)
 * The draft was not written "objectively" as you described. Sources should be independent of the subject, and the draft should be written from a neutral POV. Fancy Refrigerator (talk) 21:53, 30 March 2023 (UTC)

Please stop re-adding that adcopy to your sandbox - we do not welcome promotional material anywhere. If you continue to add puffery for this company, this account will be disabled. Sam Kuru (talk) 01:19, 31 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello, it's not promotional, I want to make it neutral, it's a company that is listed on the Shanghai stock exchange, I just put it in the sandbox so as not to affect anything and completely edit the last draft that I have saved to review where it fails and correct and then ask the verification, I can't do that in my sandbox? KanonVNZ (talk) 01:26, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
 * @Kuru KanonVNZ (talk) 01:29, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
 * You cannot use silly claims like "See comprehensive visibility from edge to application, understand advanced threat intelligence and analytics to grasp cybersecurity posture, and Act Distributed and layered defense to protect from multilayer, multistage cyber-attacks." That's garbage - use neutral language and stick to facts that are supported by reliable sources written by third-parties. NOT gushing press releases. Sam Kuru (talk) 01:33, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Ok, I'm going to remove the garbage from the text and report it so you can review it. KanonVNZ (talk) 01:39, 31 March 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hillstone Networks (July 27)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Rich Smith were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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